Verb Forms
In this sentence,
practicing and
competing are
gerunds (verbs functioning as nouns) and “to eat” is an
infinitive. It sounds pretty awkward—just like being an athlete with a sweet tooth.
Instead:
or
Note that you don’t need to repeat the “to” in each instance of the infinitive form of the verb. As long as the form of the verb is the same in all three cases, you’re good to go.
Nouns vs. Verbs
Lamb chops is a noun. Brussel sprouts is a noun too, but to fry is a verb. Tsk tsk.
or
Delicious.
Noun Number
Multiple buses, one train? That’s not going to solve any environmental issues. Here’s a better solution:
More Mismatched Parts of Speech
What’s the adverb of “pizzazz”? Great question. Both deftly (adverb) and with pizzazz (a prepositional phrase) need to be the same part of speech for this sentence to be properly parallel. And if “pizzazzilly” isn’t a word, that means two nouns are needed.
Subject Matter
Huh? Unless being a fabulous designer is a recipe for steak, these two actions don’t seem to have much in common. Parallelism in subject matter means that everything discussed in a sentence should have at least some amount of clarity and relatedness.
or
The possible connections are endless, but for proper parallelism, that connection must be clear to the reader.